Tuesday, 30 July 2019
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I am a student at Campion College. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
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Wow Taylan, This is a wonderful poem. I love when you wrote resolutions over and over.
ReplyDeleteFrom Amanda
Hi Taylan
ReplyDeleteYour poem is great I love how you repeated the word resolution Next time I think it would be good if you could copy and paste your documents in steed of embedding them. Apart from that I loved your work and I think you did a great job
From Annabelle
Hi Taylan,
ReplyDeleteYour poem is really creative I like the different parts you have talked about. Your picture relates really nicely. Overall you did an amazing job. Nextime I think you should upload it differently because it is a bit hard to read when it is that small.
Good Job! :)